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Post by asmith on Apr 27, 2008 14:49:27 GMT -5
I realize since all of the members here are writers, there's going to be a lot of posts concerning work getting critiqued. To avoid too much clutter ahead of time, I've decided it would be a good idea to make a thread for all work to be judged. Here are the rules:
RULES:
1. No erotica/gore/shock stories. Keep it to wiat you would see in an R movie, if you can.
2. Give constructive criticizm only. No insults or flaming towards another member or their work.
3. If you have posted your work on another site, please post a link ([ url]name of site[ /url]) instead of posting the entire work here. It helps save space.
4. Failure to follow these rules will result in a punishment based off of the admin and/or the first responding moderator's discretion.
5. Feel free to share any types of work, ranging from short stories to novels to songs you've written.
*Drake, if you want to make any changes at all, feel free. Just want to make sure we get more posts in here than just people asking for critizism. =)
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Post by asmith on May 1, 2008 14:05:05 GMT -5
Well, I guess since I created it, I'll make the first post ;P I've been writing, as some of you know, what started as a short story and has exploded into something way too ****ing long and it seems to be no end in sight lol. I finished Chapter 10 last night, and if any of you could check it out (or check out any of the others, for that matter) it'd be greatly appreciated. a-s-m-i-t-h.deviantart.com/art/DOTC-Part-X-84382788
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Post by MrsLLawliet on May 1, 2008 14:07:25 GMT -5
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Post by asmith on May 1, 2008 14:08:41 GMT -5
Multiple-personalities, L?
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Post by MrsLLawliet on May 1, 2008 14:13:46 GMT -5
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Post by asmith on May 1, 2008 14:20:53 GMT -5
This is what I posted on Lady in the Willow:
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Post by MrsLLawliet on May 1, 2008 14:30:58 GMT -5
This is what I posted on Lady in the Willow: I have issues with fluidity and structure. Just ask Drake. Hate structure, anyways. Life's too structured. How about my poetry too?
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Post by asmith on May 1, 2008 14:58:41 GMT -5
This is what I posted on Lady in the Willow: I have issues with fluidity and structure. Just ask Drake. Hate structure, anyways. Life's too structured. How about my poetry too? Haven't had a chance to check out the poetry. Also, I'm not really a great poetic critique, as I'm a pretty sub-par poet, though I do enjoy writing it. I'll still check it out, if you like.
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Post by MrsLLawliet on May 1, 2008 15:04:50 GMT -5
sure thing. Man, I love it when we all get together
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Post by asmith on May 1, 2008 15:08:10 GMT -5
LOL This has been a good past hour. I've gotten some more writing done, and I've read some good work as well. It's funny how there's been about 20 posts in the past hour and all of them are you and me lol.
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Post by MrsLLawliet on May 1, 2008 16:16:00 GMT -5
Yeah. Drake and lor are quiet...
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Post by asmith on May 1, 2008 18:40:55 GMT -5
Don't forget omnipotent (I think that was his name lol)
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Post by Omnipotent on May 2, 2008 2:36:12 GMT -5
I'm only quiet because there's nothing for me to reply to.
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Post by MrsLLawliet on May 2, 2008 7:47:40 GMT -5
I'm only quiet because there's nothing for me to reply to. now you've got something to reply to! Don't forget, the less active this forum is, the less chance it will have to succeed. I;m thinking of pulling most of my forum-going friends into this. Not really for the RP ,but for traffic. I'm also working on RP recruiting.
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Post by asmith on May 2, 2008 13:56:18 GMT -5
I'm only quiet because there's nothing for me to reply to. now you've got something to reply to! Don't forget, the less active this forum is, the less chance it will have to succeed. I;m thinking of pulling most of my forum-going friends into this. Not really for the RP ,but for traffic. I'm also working on RP recruiting. He's right. The more people post, the more likely people will join. Aw, no critique for my work?
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